My name is Jayzhon. I like to play sports. I like to care about other people. My iwi is Tuhoe. I live with both my nans, my aunty, my mum, my mum’s partner and my baby sister - it’s like my family just not my dad.
My favourite subject is science and sports and reading/writing and also maths because I can go on my device and go on studyladder, my reading activity and my future writing. My challenges are to use better words in my writing and completing my reading activities on time.
This year I am looking forward to making it into interschool ki-o-rahi team and trying to get more work done by not getting distracted by any of my friends. Two people that inspire me are Lykin and Keanu in my class. They help me. For example every time I get distracted by other people they remind me to move away.
Tuesday, 5 June 2018
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ReplyDeletekia ora
ReplyDeletehello Jayzhon i just wanted to tell you that your work is great and i want to congratulate you for your amazing work you have prodused.
ReplyDeletekia ora,jay
ReplyDeleteI like that you want to stay focused.
I like to play ki-o-rahi at home.
I like the way you are kind
Kia ora, I am Ashlynne from Ormond School.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you like playing sports and helping others, that is so kind
I learnt that your favourite subject is science, maths, sports, reading and writing.
Maybe you could use more full stops and less commas.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https://http://ormondashlynnew.blogspot.com/”>here</a>
Mā te wā
Ashlynne
thank you for your feedback. ill work on my full stop and that so yeah thanks you so much for replying and yah so bye
DeleteKia ora, I am Ashlynne from Ormond School.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you like playing sports and helping others, that is so kind
I learnt that your favourite subject is science, maths, sports, reading and writing.
Maybe you could use more full stops and less commas.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https://http://ormondashlynnew.blogspot.com/”>here</a>
Mā te wā
Ashlynne
Kia ora, I am Ashlynne from Ormond School.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you like playing sports and helping others, that is so kind
I learnt that your favourite subject is science, maths, sports, reading and writing.
Maybe you could use more full stops and less commas.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https://http://ormondashlynnew.blogspot.com/”>here</a>
Mā te wā
Ashlynne
Kia ora, I am Ian from Riverdale School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you take care of people
I learnt that family is more important
Maybe you could add a picture
Ma te wa
Ian
hi ian im jayzhon from te-hapara school and thank you so much for comment back on my comment i really appreciate you commenting on my blog and i hope we meet each other one day
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